07-09-2016, 01:02 AM
The description on Deadly Smile (weapon) reads:
A discarded weapon of a crazed, deformed child murderer. While not extremely deadly, it prays on the psychological weakness of its victims.
Should be 'preys'. Also, the sentence flows better if you say "psychological weaknesses" instead of "weakness".
A discarded weapon of a crazed, deformed child murderer. While not extremely deadly, it prays on the psychological weakness of its victims.
Should be 'preys'. Also, the sentence flows better if you say "psychological weaknesses" instead of "weakness".