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The Typo Thread
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Not so much a typo as poor grammar, but the lore blip about Azorus:

'Azorus, the leader of the Sun's Ichor, a disbanded extremist Mercalan sect, was very well known for the way he fed the vampires the Sun's Ichor captured his own blood to torture them. '


It's extremely awkwardly phrased.

Here's a more easily understood version of the blip I cooked up:

'Azorus was the leader of the Sun's Ichor, a disbanded extremist Mercalan sect. He was most well known for the way he tortured captured vampires, feeding them his own Glykin blood.'
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